Mark-ups of original article (number without repeats)

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Who are the intended readers and what are their expectations?

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Has the writer met the expectations of his intended readers in terms of quality and salience of ideas, organization and support, and usage, mechanics, and punctuation?

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Specific examples for improvement cited:

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What is the central theme of the paper?

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Are the central ideas clear, correct, appropriate, and adequately developed?

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Specific examples for improvement cited:

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Is the paper organized in some acceptable fashion so that the parts stick together and one part leads to the next?

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Specific examples for improvement cited:

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Are there other aspects of the topic (Tolerance) that have been overlooked?

Are there better examples that would bring out concerns more appropriately?

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How are Tolerance and Diversity related?

What do you think about that, and how might that action be incorporated into this paper?

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